Nice try to capture some lightings on the potrait. I think this portrait fair better than the previous one which you posted.
You are getting alittle overwhelmed with PS though. The toning looks pretty strong which create a flatness in the overall picture. Because of this, it looks somewhat sureal too. Well, it's not wrong or bad. It's more like con and pro here. So you have to decide for yourself which works the best in your situation. If the picture was original taken in flat lighting, I think the toning have justified it.