My try on foooooooooooooood!!

[wind08]

YOGHURT

As usual, C&C much appreciated

 

[IceCarbon]

looks yummy! Maybe a portrait orientation will be better?

 

[nigel84]

i find it a little too warm and yellowish.

 

[nzh08]

COOL CUP! Haha.. Interesting catch to me..

 

[raptor1988]

background is too bright.. Ist glance i'm drawn to it. Its done on purpose?

 

[jlkk76]

hand look xtra to me..perhaps a table wif colored table cloth look better bah..

just my 2 cents..

 

[tainted]

YOGHURT

As usual, C&C much appreciated

I feel you can take a closer up shot of it.
Alot of distracting shadows, it would be better to clean it up with cloning or just painting it out with the same background color.
The extra spoon in the back is also distracting.
I'm sure you can do better

 

[wind08]

background is too bright.. Ist glance i'm drawn to it. Its done on purpose?

nope, this is a snapshot actually... bought the yoghurt, stopped in the middle of the mall and took this... very minimal editting done (only change white balance)... taken at f1.4

hand look xtra to me..perhaps a table wif colored table cloth look better bah..

just my 2 cents..

haha.. i have a picture of it on a table but the table itself is... white:bsmilie:

I feel you can take a closer up shot of it.
Alot of distracting shadows, it would be better to clean it up with cloning or just painting it out with the same background color.
The extra spoon in the back is also distracting.
I'm sure you can do better

thank you for the advies!! will go and edit

 

[dekra]

Nice... Slurp!

But the background is too burnt and bright

 

[dark72]

The background light is uneven... It is kind of distracting

 

[Agenda]

I like it but the white background too contrasting.

 

[wind08]

thanks for all the comments, will go improve on it ..

meanwhile, enjoy a cabonara

 

[raptor1988]

you purposely snap half of it only? Very teasing. But i'll prefer to see the whole plate..

 

[dark72]

thanks for all the comments, will go improve on it ..

meanwhile, enjoy a cabonara

Would prefer if the greens were more towards the top left edge of the plate. Now it looks chopped off half way.