My try on foooooooooooooood!!


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wind08

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YOGHURT :D



As usual, C&C much appreciated ;)
 

jlkk76

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hand look xtra to me..perhaps a table wif colored table cloth look better bah..

just my 2 cents..:)
 

tainted

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YOGHURT :D



As usual, C&C much appreciated ;)
I feel you can take a closer up shot of it.
Alot of distracting shadows, it would be better to clean it up with cloning or just painting it out with the same background color.
The extra spoon in the back is also distracting.
I'm sure you can do better :)
 

wind08

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background is too bright.. Ist glance i'm drawn to it. Its done on purpose?
nope, this is a snapshot actually... bought the yoghurt, stopped in the middle of the mall and took this... very minimal editting done (only change white balance)... taken at f1.4

hand look xtra to me..perhaps a table wif colored table cloth look better bah..

just my 2 cents..:)
haha.. i have a picture of it on a table but the table itself is... white:bsmilie:

I feel you can take a closer up shot of it.
Alot of distracting shadows, it would be better to clean it up with cloning or just painting it out with the same background color.
The extra spoon in the back is also distracting.
I'm sure you can do better :)
thank you for the advies!! will go and edit :D:D
 

dark72

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The background light is uneven... It is kind of distracting
 

wind08

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thanks for all the comments, will go improve on it :)..

meanwhile, enjoy a cabonara :D

 

dark72

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thanks for all the comments, will go improve on it :)..

meanwhile, enjoy a cabonara :D

Would prefer if the greens were more towards the top left edge of the plate. Now it looks chopped off half way.
 

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