My Ride

[tauhu]

Taken this photo while i was halfway doing my report just now.

This is my ride which takes me to the Uni everyday, sun and rain, day and night...Although it's rusting under the torture of Perth's tough weather, it has never failed being loyal to me =)

This photo is to show my respect to my ride, to show how important it is to me.

I personally feel that this picture is giving me the emotion i want. Would love to hear from you guys.

 

[tkbonz]

I am able to understand how you feel about your bike from the picture!

However, I'd prefer the shadows on the right side, especially that dark patch, to be removed. It pulls the observer's eyes away from the bike...

Well done overall!

 

[sprintist]

basically, dont overdo the shadow highlights, all the halo-ing spoilt the photograph