My Mood...


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dorts

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Hello! Another small little series. Also viewable in my APAD. Hope you are like it. C&C welcomed. Harsh comments are warmly welcomed as well. ;)


My Mood - Gloomy...






My Mood - Fallen...




Thanks for viewing.
My Mood - Dead...

 

dorts

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I would appriciate some comments. :)
 

lynxiger

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Ok let's see, harsh comments huh ... Just kidding. ;)

I like the 1st one best, as it does give me gloomy feeling, but could be improved on framing as the small leaf at the bottom is distracting.
The first 2 have "looking up" view, kind of like a bug's view looking up. :dunno:
The #2 is labeled fallen, but the flower is still up high in the frame.
#3 needs a better background I think. Just my 3 cents.
 

dorts

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Ok let's see, harsh comments huh ... Just kidding. ;)

I like the 1st one best, as it does give me gloomy feeling, but could be improved on framing as the small leaf at the bottom is distracting.
The first 2 have "looking up" view, kind of like a bug's view looking up. :dunno:
The #2 is labeled fallen, but the flower is still up high in the frame.
#3 needs a better background I think. Just my 3 cents.
Thanks for your comment! At last someone can give some comments.

#2 is labeled fallen, because the flower has fallen from its tree to another leave below.

#3, agreed it needs a better background.

Thanks! :)
 

yannh

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Hmmm... not really sure what's your mood, because not really sure where do you focus...:bigeyes: haha!
 

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This is how I feel:

Pic 1 is not too bad. Quite close to the theme.

Pic 2. I think you may want to change the angle. Otherwise, it can be confusing of what has fallen.

Oic 3. I think it will be better if there is only one flower instead of two. However, I like the silhoutte feeling. :)
 

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