My Love Charm


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velasco

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After a long exile from the critique corner, i want your input on this piece of photo.
I just wanna know if any impact or emotions were evoked from the picture?
I fear the photo is not strong enough to stand on its own. I dont know.. i want it to look like a humourus-candid-mysterious piece? haha



What's mine is yours,
What's yours is mine,
Let our powers cross the line,
I offer up this gift to share,
Switch our powers through the air
Love-in-mist be the flower,
ignite the teddy's power.​
 

kruger

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Your write up seems a bit confusing. You said "I fear the photo is not strong enough to stand on its own." so the enhancement was the little poem? Mysterious? Probably due the to the smoke. The bear does look funny and cute, perhaps a round container may give it a better feel than the rectangular takeaway container.
 

night86mare

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i'm going to say that i like this a lot.

i'm not sure what sort of emotion you want to evoke, but somehow i'm thinking of horror movies here, and greenish tones might work better for this picture if that is your intention.
 

velasco

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lol. thats quite surprising. thanks anywho. i think its a turn off that i used those el cheapo reusable container. until i redo this shot with a more appealing set up, i'll lock this up. paiseh! hahahha
 

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