my little walk


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r0n9

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hi guys.. still new to photography so.. how about some comments on these few photos of mine? thx alot!!

Cheers

#1 - white among the green



#2 - life among stone



#3 - signboard



#4 - abandoned



#5 - lonely lamp post

 

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shot on negatives? :)

#1 could do with a bit less DOF. #2 could zoom in a bit more. And thrash #4, imo it doesn't work.
 

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yep.. they are on negatives..

khairi, for "abandoned" other than flash, it was mostly the lighting at the bball court, yellowish light

foxtwo, mind explaining why it doesnt pass? :)

thx for ur comments
 

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r0n9 said:
yep.. they are on negatives..

khairi, for "abandoned" other than flash, it was mostly the lighting at the bball court, yellowish light

foxtwo, mind explaining why it doesnt pass? :)

thx for ur comments
Your combination of flash & the court lighting gives it the unsightly bright reflection. And even though ur pic is small, can already see it is a bit blur. Expected if i presume correctly u shot without support.

I would try for another angle, if possible to eliminate the reflection to as minimal as possible. Use support & dun use flash too.

I like the inclusion of the tree at the background. If I could, I'd try backing off and reshoot in either landscape or portrait in WA to include only the basketball board thingy (sorry, can't remember wat it's called at the moment, :sweat: ) and the tree.

Should get something like a yellow-cast stand & tree side-by-side, with the backgroud utterly black. Worth a look, i think.

Try having another go at that if you like. :)
 

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i see.. heh thanks alot.. will go and hav another shot at it..
 

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