Lighting for the 1st one nice.Think could be beta if the model moves forward slightly a bit to remove the shadow from his right face.
Kinda like the second picture . I have a different opinion from tunster, I think the seperation of the blue and the white from the line is good. But I think the white clothing on his right eye ,if removed, will yield a beta picture. Caption for 2nd picture spot on. :bsmilie:
Just take note of the 2nd pic where there is a white batch near the right eye of the boy. If you where to move more to the right when compositing this picture, you might be able to 'avoid' that batch of white.