I don't know pics too well but here's a go.
First: There was no attraction from the main subject. What are you trying to depict about this little girl to the viewer? What is she doing? I don't think anyone can answer that.
Interaction with your subject create an interesting pic.
Second: Which is your main subject? The sky? the city lights? What are you trying to convey in this picture?
I think you can answer what the pictures are trying to convey.