my first drop.


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acupofkopi

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my very first time shooting the droplets.
c&c please so i could improve.
still don't really get on how to really focus on the droplets itself.

 

Galv2006

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wider DOF, so that could read the words clearly
my 2 cent :)
 

Del_CtrlnoAlt

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DOF too shallow.
Cup handle cropped, if u wanna have this kinda view, either find a cup without that handle, or turn it around to hide it, else show in its entirety.
Angle look like the cup is going to drop anytime, check alignment, and use a tripod.
Tissue paper or cloth look disgusting... a piece of plastic would look better.
Water droplets on the side of the cup is distracting, does not add asthetic to the picture instead show a messy job. Either you clean up the cup, or you use a dropper and use a more viscous solution to drop on the side of the cup to create the effect. Sugar syrup, clear epoxy, 3M studs are good example...
 

acupofkopi

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thanks del and galv
will notice those things
 

zekai

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clean the cup... idea is there.... execution is ok minus the focusing and the preparation.
work harder
 

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