My First attempt at Portraiture

[huanmin]

Hey all!

I convinced my girlfriend to model for me in a very makeshift studio at her place (comprising of a white canvas and some clothes pegs ). Been popping around the forum a lot and I've read some really constructive comments on some of the photos, so I decided to brave the storm and upload some of my newbie photos too... :embrass:

I uploaded 2 other photos, but guess I'm not allowed to post more than 1 a week so... here are the links anyway!

http://gallery.clubsnap.com/data/500/IMG_1867.jpg
http://gallery.clubsnap.com/data/500/IMG_1867.jpg

Comments and especially Criticisms please! Thank you!

(Oh I haven't done any post-processing for the photos - cos I don't really know how to - so I'd really appreciate some tips too!)

 

[Del_CtrlnoAlt]

1/2 face dun work
can see nostrils, no good
hand shake prominent
spots detected

overall... not a keeper.

 

[Golgotha]

1 more thing, there's a stray strand of hair coming down across her eye, face.............

 

[huanmin]

1/2 face dun work
can see nostrils, no good
hand shake prominent
spots detected

overall... not a keeper.

Hi Del_CtrlnoAlt,

Thanks for the comments! I was just wondering, what spots are you referring to?

And I just realised all the links link back to the same picture. :sweat:

Picture 2: http://gallery.clubsnap.com/data/500/IMG_1726.jpg
Picture 3: http://gallery.clubsnap.com/data/500/IMG_1827.jpg

Looks like I've got lots to learn!

 

[wynx]

You gotta work on the lighting more and the colors of the pics...very dull...just my 2 cents.