Momiji Leaf


Nov 2, 2009
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1. in what area is critique to be sought?
Composition and Lighting

2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
Autumn Fall

3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
Beautiful Leaf

4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture
Some of the leafs is not have the perfect form

 

Sep 8, 2009
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Choa Chu Kang
#2
Hello.... no expert here...

The white thing in the background is very distracting...
The leaves... look OOF ...
The lowest leaf is somewhat cut off by the edge of the picture... could be better there i guess...

my humble 2c worth... not like i can do better...

cheers and keep shooting ;)
 

ovaltinemilo

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Sep 12, 2009
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#3
wow...the bokeh looks smooth and nice...but the subject is rather soft + sm parts cut off... I like the blue bckgd+ red leave.....nice red leaves!
 

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king2penn

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Feb 15, 2007
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#4
the picture does not 'stand out' enough for me.. Perhaps try a different composition?
 

aspenx

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Aug 10, 2008
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#5
The blue in the background does not work in your favour to bring out the autumn feeling.

Having the brown thing (?) which is currently on the left of your frame as the background might have been a better idea.

The tip of the leaf is clipped is rather disturbing too.
 

soons

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Mar 22, 2007
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the leaves on the background were clipped off... a little annoying.
Stop down a little at F2.8 for better sharpness as 50mm F1.8 II is naturally soft wide open

Nice attempt!I love to take that kind of picture too.
 

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