MODELinn: Jennifer On Campus


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razor

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Some random outdoors photos of Jennifer taken over the wet weekend at SMU.


1. Intro




2. Shades of Grey




3. Blue Mozaics



4. Jennifer
 

eow

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my picks #1 and 4..very nice
 

Rashkae

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Shades of grey: Very nice, but you may want to PP the chickenpox-marks away from between her eyebrows. A bit distracting.

Blue mosaic: Excellent!!! Maybe some PP on the rash in her armpit though?
 

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She is very skinny hor..I love the last photo..
 

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Very nice pics bro! #1 very power! ;p

Like #3 & #4 very much too! :thumbsup:

Sad cannot join you third consecutive shoot in a row.. :cry:
 

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Shades of grey: Very nice, but you may want to PP the chickenpox-marks away from between her eyebrows. A bit distracting.

Blue mosaic: Excellent!!! Maybe some PP on the rash in her armpit though?

hee hee..you know what.... i also have the chicken pox marks at the same spot on my face.... i feel a "connection" between us....;p


Thanks!
 

Venom81

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I like #3 and #4. She looks a bit like ex MTV VJ Nadya.
 

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3...:thumbsup:
 

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4. Jennifer
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:thumbsup: Nice pose....pretty face.....however the outfit is :confused::thumbsd: Plain..., sloppy..... It dosen't bring out the beauty of her figure...
i think the organizer Ivan have to work harder for the model's outfit and accesories. Not just pretty faces......
 

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4. Jennifer
:thumbsup: Nice pose....pretty face.....however the outfit is :confused::thumbsd: Plain..., sloppy..... It dosen't bring out the beauty of her figure...
i think the organizer Ivan have to work harder for the model's outfit and accesories. Not just pretty faces......[/QUOTE]

personally I like this outfit, kinda different from the normal dresses if u look carefully.. well to each his own, will do better:)
 

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Actually.. this outfit is quite challenging to shoot cause it is easily becomes over-exposed due to its colour.

i had a tough time balancing that. Which i think was a good practice session for all.

She looked like a Greek goddess in this outfit. ;p
 

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i think the outfit is great! its got a very understated fashion savvyness... the contrast of the lush greenery and the outfit brings a certain mood out of picture number FOUR,
i also like the 3rd picture i think, the one with the mosaic wall and using a light from below to shoot, light is very sensual and well balanced , i commend you on using avant garde lighting like this!!
KEEP IT UP!
 

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Can you share ur focal lenght and f stop setting for Pic 4?

Generally i feel your images are a little dark. Like lacking in the vibrance. With the use of the reflector it should make the model stand out more in the foreground. At the same time be able to light up the background. Perhaps the DOF is a little too shallow?

The poses and angles are good. But i'd suggest to try and highlight the areas that you will want to stand out more. :)
 

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i think the outfit is great! its got a very understated fashion savvyness... the contrast of the lush greenery and the outfit brings a certain mood out of picture number FOUR,
i also like the 3rd picture i think, the one with the mosaic wall and using a light from below to shoot, light is very sensual and well balanced , i commend you on using avant garde lighting like this!!
KEEP IT UP!

Thank you. Appreciate your comments.:)
 

razor

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Can you share ur focal lenght and f stop setting for Pic 4?

Generally i feel your images are a little dark. Like lacking in the vibrance. With the use of the reflector it should make the model stand out more in the foreground. At the same time be able to light up the background. Perhaps the DOF is a little too shallow?

The poses and angles are good. But i'd suggest to try and highlight the areas that you will want to stand out more. :)
Thanks. appreciate the tips!

I will check on the exif info when I get back home.

:)
 

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Nice. Especially #4. Simple yet elegant. a little like those Japanese fashion advertisements.
 

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