Melvin's take: Malgosia


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melvinmah

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Participated in Modelinn's shoot for the first time (this morning), and to be so honest, I was very impressed with the setup and all. Hey Ivan, if you're reading this.. you did a fantastic job. Guess this is about the only feedback I can come up with, 'coz I can't seem to find any fault with this ogranized shoot! Also, thanks for bringing in such a beautiful model. Thumbs up. And here goes, my contribution.. hope you guys like it.

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melvinmah

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And after having a couple of shots that I'm very satisfied with (personally), I decided to take a different approach and started to 'experiment'. That's something which I'd never done before. For all my shoots (though I've not participated in many), I always stick to the safe shots throughout.

Here, a noob's attempt to intentional blur and the most debatable subject, messy hair (not trying to challenge anyone)!

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Deadpoet

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Messy hair is definately ok IF that is your intention. Your attemp was not bad. The crop is a bit too tight for my taste.
 

modelinn

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Thanks Melvin, I am really glad u enjoyed it! U made my day:)

Love the mood of the shots u taken, very intriguing! But colour a little too saturated I feel..post production done to colour?
 

ah_kai1983

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cool man! i love your style bro!
 

melvinmah

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Thanks Melvin, I am really glad u enjoyed it! U made my day:)

Love the mood of the shots u taken, very intriguing! But colour a little too saturated I feel..post production done to colour?
Thanks Ivan!

I get that comment on alot of my other photos too. Just a preference of mine, I just like my photos very saturated so usually I pump it up. Perhaps it gone over the limit on this one. Hmm..
 

tropica_aloysius

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Hey dude, i like pic6, however i feel that the background is a bit of a spoiler. i feel that the mood is there.

A pretty nice series i would say! Good job. = ]
 

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Firstly, the model wasn't too stiff and also, you've made her looks natural with that post. I perfer to show a little bit of the other side of face might be better. Lasty, I like the ambient :)
 

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This is good! :) Cheerful and the grass is so green!
 

irenet

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IMO this is my favourite model series you've done... i've got a thing for the fly-away hair thingy :bsmilie:

everything is ok except #7... too much hair covering the face? lol..

just my 2 cents :)
 

wainism

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yo melvin,

i think u have great keepers in #2 and 5.
 

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Like these 3 shots, #2 & #4 expressions are natural :thumbsup:
Can feel the mood in #5, maybe can try the B/W w/ grain, shld enhance the pic even further
 

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