melting smile


May 13, 2011
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#1
1. In what area is critique to be sought?
Any suggestions that can improve in taking kids photos.

2. What i hope to achieve with the work piece.
To capture better kids facial expression in expressing that moment.

3. Under what circumstance is the photo taken?
Indoor with sunlight from the window behind me when taking.

4. What the critique seeker personally thinks of the photo.
Just feel that something is missing. A stronger happiness feeling that i cant bring out.


Feel free to comment.
Thank you!! :D


 

sjackal

Senior Member
Jul 9, 2008
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#2
Replies in red.

1. In what area is critique to be sought?
Any suggestions that can improve in taking kids photos.

More candies and promises of ice-cream.

2. What i hope to achieve with the work piece.
To capture better kids facial expression in expressing that moment.

Need more chocolates and ice-cream.

3. Under what circumstance is the photo taken?
Indoor with sunlight from the window behind me when taking.

Good.

4. What the critique seeker personally thinks of the photo.
Just feel that something is missing. A stronger happiness feeling that i cant bring out.

Need more candies, chocolates, and promises of ice-cream.

Feel free to comment.

Good pic.
Thank you!! :D


 

wolfton

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Jun 21, 2010
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#3
Nice picture.

Some suggestions. Since this is your home, you may want to try to remove the distracting element at the background, such as the prayer table. You can slowly arrange your frame in your own time, then when it's time to snap that pic, bring in your wife or any other people to make your daughter smile wider.

She's cute btw :)
 

Shizuma

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Mar 19, 2012
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#6
please don't crop children head or body parts
 

May 13, 2011
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#8
Nice picture.

Some suggestions. Since this is your home, you may want to try to remove the distracting element at the background, such as the prayer table. You can slowly arrange your frame in your own time, then when it's time to snap that pic, bring in your wife or any other people to make your daughter smile wider.

She's cute btw :)
Will try to remove distracting elements and try out different ways of framing. Actually she is my niece, will try to get her parents involve in making her smile wider. Thanks a lot for the suggestions.
 

Foxshade

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Jun 26, 2009
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#11
The trick of taking kid shots is to let them do what they like to do, and stalk them with a long zoom lens. ;)

You'll get the most beautiful smiles.
 

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