Melancholy
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Wolfgang said:It's been awhile... and i do look forward to all constructive feedback & crits.
Cheers!
Great shot, Wolfgang.
I think the B&W really brings out the mood that befits the title!
Look forward to more goodies from you
wolfgang
this is better than the lime light one !!
the upper half of her body is very prominent, starting from her face, the prominence starts to lose itself near the lower half of the body, which i suppose is what you've wanted to convey, coz that's what i see and i like it.
this whole shot is very nicely done, but i'd prefer the bottom parts to be darker. as in not the model but the floor that the model is standing on.. that area is a -little- distracting and should do with a -little- bit more DI.
but this is good
:thumbsup: :thumbsup:
this is better than the lime light one !!
the upper half of her body is very prominent, starting from her face, the prominence starts to lose itself near the lower half of the body, which i suppose is what you've wanted to convey, coz that's what i see and i like it.
this whole shot is very nicely done, but i'd prefer the bottom parts to be darker. as in not the model but the floor that the model is standing on.. that area is a -little- distracting and should do with a -little- bit more DI.
but this is good
:thumbsup: :thumbsup:
comment and critics?
I lovvvvve the mood in this picture , the connection was made and the moment captured!
Unfortunatly , i didn't like the cropping as it doesn't seem quite there with 1 hand , 1 knee and the foot being chopped off .. Unless this was intentional than i don't think it works .. cos its distracting.
But damm.. i really like the pose and the mood. Not the BG though.
Cheers
Jazer
I lovvvvve the mood in this picture , the connection was made and the moment captured!
Unfortunatly , i didn't like the cropping as it doesn't seem quite there with 1 hand , 1 knee and the foot being chopped off .. Unless this was intentional than i don't think it works .. cos its distracting.
But damm.. i really like the pose and the mood. Not the BG though.
Cheers
Jazer
hwchoy said:wolfgang, just give you my honest reaction, I read DEPRESSION rather than MELANCHOLY
hmmm... aren't melancholy and depression mean the same??
ok maybe I am splitting hair, probably a difference in degree. melancholy leans towards being sad with an element of reflecting on the past. :dunno:
sequitur, Jazer, hwchoy;
thanks for the feedback and kind words. Will try even harder the next time round.
Cheers!
thanks for the feedback and kind words.
Will try even harder the next time round. Cheers!
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