Matilda House

[eikin]

i like this best in the entire series. plenty of rotting details surrounding the broken circuit box with the broken wires visually leading to it, though i still cannot make myself understand why the slant is there.

last but not least, please try to follow the guidelines
http://forums.clubsnap.org/showthread.php?t=139941

by putting up alot of pictures, you are demanding more attention for comments, which might be unfair to other users of critique corner. it's a chore to look through so many pictures at one time trying to think about what to say about each and every one of them, and naturally the comments will not be in-depth. i believe most people here will feel intimidated to make so many comments at once.

 

[Soldi]

i like this best in the entire series. plenty of rotting details surrounding the broken circuit box with the broken wires visually leading to it, though i still cannot make myself understand why the slant is there.

last but not least, please try to follow the guidelines
http://forums.clubsnap.org/showthread.php?t=139941

by putting up alot of pictures, you are demanding more attention for comments, which might be unfair to other users of critique corner. it's a chore to look through so many pictures at one time trying to think about what to say about each and every one of them, and naturally the comments will not be in-depth. i believe most people here will feel intimidated to make so many comments at once.

Hi Eikin
thank you for ur Honest Comments and Critiques .. will try to work on the slanting and angles

and I Apologise for posting too many Pictures..

Soldi