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Sampoerna

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#1 - she look moody
#2 - where is the policeman? :eek:
#3 - i like the messy hair feel ;)
 

boredphuck

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#1 - I thought she look more like half smile and half moody!
#2 - The policeman did came after that:bsmilie:
#3 - Me too :D

More C & C pls. I need it!
i like pics with eye contact so i prefer 1 except her choice of clothes made her look fat (or was it your angle?)

2 didnt work for me because no eye contact, u clipped off her knee, background was distracting to me.

3 swings both way for me. i like the b&w effect but again eye contact.

really wanted to shoot her but slots were full! :cry:
 

cutecdo

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i like pics with eye contact so i prefer 1 except her choice of clothes made her look fat (or was it your angle?)

2 didnt work for me because no eye contact, u clipped off her knee, background was distracting to me.

3 swings both way for me. i like the b&w effect but again eye contact.

really wanted to shoot her but slots were full! :cry:
1 I was shooting her straight on...but there might be other angles that i didn't try

2 The "no eye contact" was intended. I thought the backgrd was distracting too..just trying my luck:D

3 Again "no eye contact" was intended.
 

Jesmun18

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Don't really like the way you compose.
The first photo seems like she is trying to support the wood by her head, the pose is a bit awkward.
It will be better if she is looking at you at the second photo, luck of this make this photo seens like something amiss.
I like the third photo the most, except ,of course, the messy hair.
 

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#1 Not a bad shot
#2 Policemen dreaming. BTW u guys get away clean?
#3 Nice and Yummy ~
 

Oly5050

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I only like #1.....fantastic model!!
 

cutecdo

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Don't really like the way you compose.
The first photo seems like she is trying to support the wood by her head, the pose is a bit awkward.
It will be better if she is looking at you at the second photo, luck of this make this photo seens like something amiss.
I like the third photo the most, except ,of course, the messy hair.
Comments noted. Will try to compose better next time:)
 

leejay

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The last one is best. You can even zoom in for that. :) :thumbsup:
 

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