Mandy

[tazzy]

My take of Mandy over the weekend... Had a nice shoot with her.
C&C are welcome.

Thank you.

 

[limwhow]

Hello tazzy.
Thank you for sharing your work. I like her very natural expression and the way she looks over her left shoulder...
Her eyes and facial features seem to be a little out of focus, though... or she may have moved? (as the picture on the wall seems sharp enough and certain parts of her blouse seems sharp)

 

[tazzy]

Thanks for your comment.

Yea I notice its abit out of focus too. Will take note of it in the next shoot.

 

[LifeInMacro]

Other than the OOF issue, I think the background is rather distracting. Also the fonts at the lower edge is best to be cropped away.

 

[Virgo]

You've captured Mandy's expression at her best. Unfortunately, the OOF and distracting background spoilt the photo. If not, this will be a great photo. Shoot more, and I'm sure you'll have superb photos to show us the next time round.

 

[tazzy]

Thank you all for the valuable comments. Keep it coming.

Will keep this in mind during the next shoot.