interesting subject, but let down by poor focusing and overexposure that leaves much of the image out-of-focus and overexposed. i feel that there could be a stronger connection between the person and the phone by including some action such as dialling the phone, or inserting coin/card into the phone booth. further simplifying the shot by eliminating the distracting background, and perhaps going closer to focus on one finger pressing a button on the phone might also give the pic more impact.