Hmm i do not quite understand the composition of this picture. The title says LV girl, so i suppose the main point of this picture is to draw attention to either the LV brand / bag and associate it with the girl?
I do not quite see the link here. If you are trying to show LV's style and poshness - then associate it as such. The background serves no purpose here at all. And the girl - her dress, hairstyle, the way she walks, all are good elements for use in portrayal. But the angle at which this was photo was taken does not work well.
Perhaps im reading too much into advertising and branding. Sorry if i caused any offense :embrass:
On a photographic point of view:
The cropped version looks better.
When shooting baggy skirts/bottom; using low angle will exaggerate the effect even more - unless that was ur intention.
Good attempt at use at shadow. Walls are good for casting shadow.
Picture seems relatively sharp but i cant say for sure unless there's a bigger res version of it.
Overall i feel that there's much potential for this picture that hasnt been fully explored. Keep shooting, try various versions, angles and you are on your way to becoming a great photographer
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