Looming Above

[yllew]

Please critique, pointers on any improvement. Thank you~~~ I will accept any suggestion~~~

 

[mcn]

secand coming, maybe :dunno:

 

[yllew]

Secand coming?? Ermm... wats tat?? /..\?

 

[lionel319]

ermm .... just my 2cents, hope u don't mind

i'm interested in knowing what is that pole actually.
After a few minutes of staring at it, i think i figured out.
Is it a chimney? And it's blowing out smoke? Or was that cloud from the sky?

It might be good to add a little detail more. I'm interested in knowing what's below the pole. Maybe adding some portion of the building into the pix would help?

Just my 2cents

 

[yllew]

Well, hmm... adding in some portion of the building. Alright, point taken, will bear that in mind. But at least I got you staring at it for awhile,
Well, actually, there is only clouds above, I changed the WB to get the orangey hue. The structure is actually a monument, not much of practical usage.

Thanks, lionel319~~~

 

[zhikang]

acherly i think it culd be better if u attemped HDR on this shot... v nice shot to begin with! like it v much!

 

[yllew]

acherly i think it culd be better if u attemped HDR on this shot... v nice shot to begin with! like it v much!

HDR... Erm... I totally sux at it... Cant really capture the mood well, tried reading up on HDR. But I think I m lacking the time to try more. But I m glad that you like it~~