Looking back


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dawson

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this was taken some time back residing in my hdd. decided today to lose some
colour on it and to describe the fading memories and 2 good friends, rewinding
what it should be over the quay.

on second thought, maybe they are tourists and know nothing at all! :bsmilie:



feel free to c&c.

cheers
 

sprintist

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first uneasy feeling is that the weight is on the right side..everything sliding all along and tilting to the right. Composition is alright but tells nothing much besides two old man getting along basically
 

dawson

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the weight to one side was due to my angle, shifted slightly down to avoid some
foliage that i don't want.

personally i'd think it lack of some act to generate interest.
 

CYNx3

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The picture is tilted and makes everything seems like it's moving to the right. Adding to that, the subject is also on the right, seems concentrated. Try making it straight in your next attempt :)
 

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