Lonely Wheel


Aug 20, 2006
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Hi, took this image in Japan. No PP done on it as I'm not good with PP.

1. in what area is critique to be sought?
Would like have suggestions on the composition, lighting and any PP required.

2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
The mood is a bit sad, as the image shows the end of a usual life of the wheel

3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
Well taken under very cold condition but have time to compose before taking.

4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture
I think there are ways of improving it but quite like the image

 

kwttan

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The picture matches your subject well. Composition and exposure looks fine to me. With some touch up (saturation, highlight, shadows and sharpness) will make the picture looks better.
 

mitsucolt

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cud do with some touching up and remove a few twigs at top of pix to clean it up a big.

not sure if adding some footprint to the trees at background would render a leading line, but it would remove any doubt that the background is fake though.

but certainly no criticism here.

bottomline:

excellent example of landscape. well selected angle, foreground. salute.
 

Aug 20, 2006
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cud do with some touching up and remove a few twigs at top of pix to clean it up a big.

not sure if adding some footprint to the trees at background would render a leading line, but it would remove any doubt that the background is fake though.

but certainly no criticism here.

bottomline:

excellent example of landscape. well selected angle, foreground. salute.
The picture matches your subject well. Composition and exposure looks fine to me. With some touch up (saturation, highlight, shadows and sharpness) will make the picture looks better.
Hi kwttan & mitsucolt, Thank you very much for the suggestions on improving the photo. Appreciate that!!!
 

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