Ling @ FC

[Canonised]

TFCD - :lovegrin:
zoom

wide

 

[surge]

e way she sits in the second pic makes her look very fat.

 

[zekai]

techincally poor in handling of details . posing is bad.

 

[poohbear]

#2 - Too messy , lack of focus on the subject, subject too small. too much space around. Straighten the back, have to be careful on the position of the right leg, otherwise look distorted . Either include or not to include the adjacent structure. Distraction resulted. Just nick picks .... shoot more