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YeHein

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1. in what area is critique to be sought?
Composition and paranoma processing

2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?

show the full moon together with esplanade
3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
Took at full moon night
4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture
i love my photo
 

foxtwo

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I love photos which have a bit of something going on in every little corner of the frame. Little details easily missed when they're not the main subject. So for this image, you need to tone down the foreground brightness as it's too distracting. I really like the illusion of the moonlight lighting up the rooftops whether it was unintended or not. Bottom framing is too tight for me though, much more of the courtyard would be preferred continued with a subtle play of light. That would bring the attention back to the moon & the rooftops. try vertical panoramic stitching instead as horizontal is not giving enough height.
 

xendrome

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so nice pic :) ...good job yehein
 

YeHein

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OMG !! i just realize i put the wrong title lol ... the title is for another photo pls excuse me :D

@foxtwo thanks for comment .. noted and will try out vertical panorama

@xendrome thanks
 

daredevil123

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#5
OMG !! i just realize i put the wrong title lol ... the title is for another photo pls excuse me :D

@foxtwo thanks for comment .. noted and will try out vertical panorama

@xendrome thanks
No wonder... I was sitting here thinking for 2 minutes what you mean with your title... *confused*
 

zane80

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First time I thought was the eyes of a fly, the title should be, Fly's eyes
 

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