1. in what area is critique to be sought?
I would like to gain feedbacks on the composition of this photo as well as the emotive feeling it induced. I would like to gain feedbacks on techniques as i feel that the shadows are too dark. I would like to know if it is alright.
2. What one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
I would like to depict a scene in Singapore where Ships have been abandoned. Clearly, this ships have once fueled Singapore's development in the past, but have been left behind in time as modernization took pace. I hope to evoke a series of emotions in this photo, allowing viewers to have an affection for Singapore's history.
3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
This picture was taken under a bright hot day on a sunday afternoon as I was taking a stroll. The reflections off the waves are mesmerizing, and I like the concept of this shot as it is unusual for me as a city dweller to experience this kind of scene in Singapore.
4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture
I feel that this photo has evoked a lot of feelings when I first saw it. I was using film, and I like the way this photo is produced. I like the composition of this photo, but I do believe that there is still improvements to be done with regards to composition.
I feel that the shadows of the ships are too dark. However, I feel that it is alright as it induces some form of emotions which I could not explain.