Hi, this is my first time posting and my humble shot recently. Please provide me with areas to work and improve on.
1. In what area is critique to be sought?
Will like to know about all areas. how to improve on composition, lighting and technique in landscape and such kite-shooting. Is the hdb background too far? Kites are not as clear as I liked.
2. What I hope to achieve with this piece of work?
To share the joy the people have are as high as the kites in the deep blue sky.
3. Under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
This was taken last weekend. around 5-6pm. Fair weather and sparse clouds. Open field opposite Sengkang sports complex. Noticed in an instance 2 girls playing, people getting their kites up happily. All this within the vicinity of our neighborhood.
4. What the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture?
Generally I am happy with the shot, composition wise. But was hoping that the hdb background is slightly higher..