Kid.

[ngyeewei]

No 1

No 2

Regards,
Yeewei

 

[ortega]

prefer #2 but there is something wrong about the sharpness and colour
maybe consider a reflector to bounce some light back into the kid's face.
also might want to take note of the hair and crop away the blue pole.

 

[Ah Pao]

One photo per week, bro. Read the posting guidelines.

The scans are not doing justice to your photos. Presentation matters; a bad presentation distracts viewers from the picture.

Pic #1 is a bit static in compostion, maybe can try shooting from another angle.
Pic #2 looks good, maybe can use fill-in flash to add a catchlight in her eyes.