Ka-chik! *camera snaps*

[Serenefotoworks]

1. in what area is critique to be sought?
I will like feedback on the general feel of the picture and the lighting

2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
Trying to explore portraiture skills, as this is my first photo shoot

3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
This was taken using my Samsung digital camera L100 with only natural sunlight as it was outdoor.
I gave the models a toy camera and ask them to freely react with it.
Used Photoshop and enhanced the colors.

4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture
Personally I like this picture because it gives me a feel of how I was like when i started out playing with my camera.

 

[Rashkae]

1. There looks to be some very poor post-processing work here, a very odd outline around her legs.
2. Why did you shop off their feet?
3. The setting/environment does not match the feel you are trying to project. Nor does the odd framing.
4. The mood expressed by the guy on the right is just "I am bored". If that's what you are trying to say people around you felt, then ok. But I do not see the "ka-chik" mood. If you had titled this "Bored" then it may be more in-theme.

 

[Octarine]

TS: you have posted this picture already in another thread and the feedback was basically the same as here. Redo the shoot, don't re-post the image

 

[Serenefotoworks]

Alright