Just A Piece of Cloth


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bennquek

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Hi people! Its my first post in the Critique Corner.. Erm, basically, I'm new to photography and I've always wanted to bring my "skills" to another level, and I strongly believe I do need a lot of guidance from others to improve myself further more..

So here goes my first post.. This shot was taken by a Konica Minolta A2 set at auto mode, edited the lighting to make the background turns darker to achieve the "spotlight" effect..

I took this photo during my lil' break time while tidying up my room, not in any particular mood at that time though (tired maybe =p)..

I'm seeking C&C on the lighting of the flash, it is too over exposed? And as for the subject, should I crumpled it up and set my main focus on the word itself with the same perspective of this current one?

Ermm.. Hope that helps for a write-up.. Will improve it (the write-up) if needed, and of cos for the future post too.. Thanks for the endurance and of cos' C&C welcome..

 

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PyeeL

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Which aspect are you seeking critique at?
What's the story behind your image?

I suggest you re-do a writeup (again).
 

tjhan

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It's a picture of a cloth, with a spotlight. It's impossible to do meaningful critique on its own. The saying a picture tells a thousand words isn't actually literal.
 

bennquek

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:embrass: Sorry guys.. Hope it is better now? :sweat:

Am sincerly sorry.. :sweat:
 

Rashkae

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To me, the picture tells no story...
 

tjhan

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It's not overexposed, to answer your question. Perhaps you can start to exit the auto modes and play along with more settings. I mean, everything is alright, in focus, nothing particularly wrong with it.
 

bennquek

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Haha.. I never thought of telling any story (no offence).. But nevertheless point taken, will be more specific in every aspect and will explore more with the other modes.. :D

Thanks all and see ya'll next week with some improvement (i hope).. ;p
 

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I'd recommend you, since you said youre a newbie, just like me and many others in here, to read up all other posts in this segmen, say 20 or more posts with >10 replies to get what / why we're here for. Compare with yours, spot the differences and work on from there.
 

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