Joy !


biskandar

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1. in what area is critique to be sought?
Composition and Joy feeling

2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
Joy feeling

3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
I found celebration on the spot by the groom in daylight when i was walkthrough , he with his friends sing together just near at the street .

4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture
I think this is just a simple point and shoot thing and quite boring , but i like the man near in the right side who play the drum .
 

coolthought

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For your info, I am not into street photography.
Just sharing my thoughts of your photo.
The guy in the middle who is occupying the most attention has his back to the camera. Can't see his joyous face. Only one guy on the left in the whole photo is portraying joy. And I feel somewhat uncomfortable seeing how the framing "cut off" his right arm.
 

biskandar

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Thanks coolthought,

Yep, i guess this picture is too tight on the crop .

For your info, I am not into street photography.
Just sharing my thoughts of your photo.
The guy in the middle who is occupying the most attention has his back to the camera. Can't see his joyous face. Only one guy on the left in the whole photo is portraying joy. And I feel somewhat uncomfortable seeing how the framing "cut off" his right arm.
 

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