Joscelyn wide angle series @ night.


NineEleven

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OK, my humble set. Showing the WA series because my PS skill sucks :p don't know how to correct skin tone & blemishes :bsmilie:

Please feel free to crit. Thanks

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TroyP

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What blemishes? :confused:
I prefer more model and less background, and she needs to relax a bit more and act naturally ;)
 

NineEleven

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What blemishes? :confused:
I prefer more model and less background, and she needs to relax a bit more and act naturally ;)
To be honest, I like the background better :bsmilie:

Cleared our her face earlier but looks too smooth now. Well, there were a lot of "bugs" flying about that night which drove her nuts. If u see the last pic she was actually staring @ one on the wall.
 

Petf69

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the series is pretty nice. as mentioned earlier, need her to relax her expression/pose a little.

don't think you need much PP, except add a bit more contrast.

next time you may want to try reducing the flash output a little or up the ISO to bring out the ambient lights.

just my 2 cents
 

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What blemishes? :confused:
I prefer more model and less background, and she needs to relax a bit more and act naturally ;)
bro, adding more background behind so can remember where the photo is taken.
 

NineEleven

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the series is pretty nice. as mentioned earlier, need her to relax her expression/pose a little.

don't think you need much PP, except add a bit more contrast.

next time you may want to try reducing the flash output a little or up the ISO to bring out the ambient lights.

just my 2 cents
#5 is my pick :thumbsup:
Thanks guys. Am replying on hp will look @ yr comments again
 

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awesome series. May i know the place?:)
 

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