Hi, I'm not very familiar with automobile photography, but I read a few comments in another thread by a senior member, and I think they apply here too.
Many of the photos are underexposed, which might be a style choice, but they make the black car very hard to see. If that was the intention though, to show how it blends into the night, you should also consider what the harsh light does to the surroundings. In this case, it makes the cement floor, honeycombed ceiling, other cars and reflector strips all jump into the photo, which is rather distracting. While in some photos, like the first, it adds some movement (receding lines in the ceiling), it is otherwise not very nice (random lights, parking lines...)
Second, there is less focus on the car than one would expect in an automobile shoot... it seems more like stills from an action movie carpark chase (albeit with the driver removed). Perhaps you might want to isolate the car from the background. (Another thread with a sportscar did this by shooting in the day and overexposing the background)
Yup, just my opinion~
incidentally, don't people normally PP out the car plates lol.