Irina - My 2nd attempt in portraiture

[timmax]

This is my 2nd attempt in portraiture, first time posting my photos in CS & first time joining Ivan-Modelinn for actual shooting session.

Great organiser & fantastic model Irina, her professionalism is commendable. C & C are welcome.

Nice meeting all of you guys at the shooting. Hope to learn more from you all


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[leejay]

:thumbsup: Not bad, buddy!

 

[sci80298]

very good for 2nd attempt. great!

 

[timmax]

:thumbsup: Not bad, buddy!

Thanks pal!

 

[timmax]

very good for 2nd attempt. great!

Hey Charles! Thanks for your encouragement

 

[Chris Lim]

SWEET! :thumbsup: wish i could shoot like that. :cry: still got lots to learn from all the shifus!

 

[osk77]

Hey man, great shots!

:thumbsup:

 

[timmax]

Hey man, great shots!

:thumbsup:

Thanks for the comments my guru.

 

[modelinn]

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I like this one a lot

Thanks for the compliment, still room for improvement...

Nowadays i realise newbies r not so simple anymore.. haha.. ;p

 

[kenzi]

Hi Timothy,

It is a very good attempt, on the overall the background looks interesting. Would have loved to see more of it.


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It would be nice to see more of her right eye. Perhaps capturing more of the roof/open space might make it a wee bit less distracting.

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I love this witih the exception of the left eye... It'd be nice to see more of the eye. the pose, the expression and the moment was very well captured. I like the tilt of the wall too.

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This I like...she really stands out from the background.

Well as long as you say, "damn, this is a good shot," no one can fault you. Enjoy

 

[Outlook]

All are very good.:thumbsup:

 

[timmax]

SWEET! wish i could shoot like that. still got lots to learn from all the shifus!

Thanks Chris... we r learning from each other... hope to see u around more.

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I like this one a lot

Thanks for the compliment, still room for improvement...

Nowadays i realise newbies r not so simple anymore.. haha..

Thanks to you for last Sunday so-called "orientation"

It got me to plan ahead & knew what to expect, but what I did not expect was the model you brought was awesomely pro :bigeyes:

The credits must go to her, pls let her know ya, thanks!

 

[timmax]

Hi Timothy,

It is a very good attempt, on the overall the background looks interesting. Would have loved to see more of it.
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It would be nice to see more of her right eye. Perhaps capturing more of the roof/open space might make it a wee bit less distracting.

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I love this witih the exception of the left eye... It'd be nice to see more of the eye. the pose, the expression and the moment was very well captured. I like the tilt of the wall too.

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This I like...she really stands out from the background.

Well as long as you say, "damn, this is a good shot," no one can fault you. Enjoy

Hi Kenzi

Thanks for your very detailed comments.

Got my 30D in Aug06, first time trying out this 50mm f/1.8 len, still got lots more to learn from the pro here, will work harder on those flaws you pointed out.

Just added 1 more picture.

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