innocent eyes of Soumil

[pcghosh]

1. in what area is critique to be sought?
post-processing , i have not done any post processing as i am not clear what to do.

2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
The eyes and natural moment of a 5 months old boy

3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
Just after bath when Soumil was in very good mood

4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture
I think the picture is crispy,but post processing might add more values.I like the simplicity of the photo.:angel:

Looking for tips/suggestions.

 

[megain]

imo you should post-process the white balance so that his eye is truly white.(has a slight blue hue now)

 

[kwttan]

Suggest you do not crop away part of the child head.

 

[bonrya]

Pic is a little too tight.. Suggest you take a step back.. Also, with the child's expression, he looks a little scared.. Maybe cos you're too close..? Nice clean background though.. And focusing on the eyes really brings out the sparkle. I like!

Did you use flash..? Try not to do that as it may come off as too harsh.

Thanks for sharing!

 

[pcghosh]

Thanks all for the suggestions,I was a bit scared and anxious for the sugegstions and feedback.

megain: will try the white balance.I did not notice that part.
kwttan:will keep that in mind in my next pic
Bonrya: I did not use the flash,but he was scared because of camera being so close(as you mentioned)