innocent eyes of Soumil


pcghosh

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Feb 23, 2010
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#1


1. in what area is critique to be sought?
post-processing , i have not done any post processing as i am not clear what to do.

2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
The eyes and natural moment of a 5 months old boy

3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
Just after bath when Soumil was in very good mood :)

4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture
I think the picture is crispy,but post processing might add more values.I like the simplicity of the photo.:angel:

Looking for tips/suggestions.
 

megain

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#2
imo you should post-process the white balance so that his eye is truly white.(has a slight blue hue now) :)
 

bonrya

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Dec 16, 2010
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#4
Pic is a little too tight.. Suggest you take a step back.. Also, with the child's expression, he looks a little scared.. Maybe cos you're too close..? Nice clean background though.. And focusing on the eyes really brings out the sparkle. I like! ;)

Did you use flash..? Try not to do that as it may come off as too harsh.

Thanks for sharing! :)
 

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pcghosh

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Feb 23, 2010
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#5
Thanks all for the suggestions,I was a bit scared and anxious for the sugegstions and feedback.

megain: will try the white balance.I did not notice that part.
kwttan:will keep that in mind in my next pic
Bonrya: I did not use the flash,but he was scared because of camera being so close(as you mentioned)
:)
 

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