the mood and setting is pretty good.
but the cut off of the smoke emitted from the incense is quite disturbing.
perhaps could have focus from a downward-to-upwards shooting stance from the lower reaches or bottom view of the incense holder.
it would be pretty interesting.
would be really interesting to see more... or perhaps, u can try a portraiture shot of this incense... the smoke emitted is quite essential, in my view.
