In Batam chinese temple


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noob117

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C&C welcome
taken on a one day trip to Batam









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:thumbsup: The first 3 are great shots.
 

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I like the concept of #1 and #3. However, personally, for #1, i would prefer the red to be more robust and also, cover more of the right side to give a more balanced display of the patterns.
As for #3, hmm, personally would prefer the focus to be on the red end of the joss sticks. Just my 2 cents la. But overall, its a good attempt! :)
 

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thks!
yapster: yes i guess shud have increased DOF or focus on the point nearer to u.

i guess the BWs dun work?
 

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nice capture..... well done .... :)
 

noob117

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some one told me it was all grey stuff no contrast thus boring.
so i guess bad colour and composition so its no gd
 

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at first glance, #1 is my fav but my eyes wander around.

i can't really find a spot that draw me in.
 

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love em all, but my favourite's the first one. At first glance it looked like a flower macro shot.
Great job!
 

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some one told me it was all grey stuff no contrast thus boring.
so i guess bad colour and composition so its no gd
I guess there's a certain amount of rescue work you can do with #2. You can work on the contrast, but it still lacks a main subject of interest.
 

noob117

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at first glance, #1 is my fav but my eyes wander around.

i can't really find a spot that draw me in.
yea i guess. after looking at it a few times. erm.. like u said nth to draw the viewer in.
like cannot make out what is it at first.


I guess there's a certain amount of rescue work you can do with #2. You can work on the contrast, but it still lacks a main subject of interest.
yea can tone up the contrast. but still center of interest is unclear
 

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