i'm a shy girl...


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AReality

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nice moment!

If u titled it "Flirting during my early days", would be ok. But i think u overdid on the presentation given this title.
 

jbma

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I like it even though a little more contrast would be great. You can call it "Precious Moments" or "When I was young..." or "The Innocence Of Childhood".
 

sejok

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Please congratulate me on my first attempt at commenting... I have for a long time been reluctant to comment because of the many responses I've seen which are negative... but here goes...

1) I found the woman's fingers really annoying... can imagine the photo much nicer without her.
2) While the titles offered by the other folk may be abt the boy, I find myself drawn to the girl... maybe something along the lines of "here, let me clean that off ur upper lip you pig.." might be appropriate and tongue in cheek ;)
3) I would have liked to see more of the girl... I feel her hat being chopped off seems to render the photo incomplete...

and as the pros here say IMHO.
 

drumma

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hahhaa!! very constructive comments!!! i like what u said..
took a look at the ladie's fingers.. hmm, nothing i can do bout it right? unless i PS the whole background and left only the 2 kids in the picture.
2. hmm.. another way of looking at it.. thanks for the different POV. :D
3. cropped off hat? i thought that was ok.. hmmm.. i prefer a tighter crop actually. :p
 

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