espn said:First... you might want to consider matching the colours of all the shots used, check your contrast and colours.
2ndly, lay out can be improved, a lot of pages have TOO much black surroundings.
Take some pride in wedding shots, it's not just a shoot for everyday.
none takenThe Oracle said:I think you have focus too much on the morning session or groom. :bigeyes: You also have diverted too much to other people. A little may be good but not too much. Not seen much of the bride but too much on the groom. My opinion is usually 60% bride, 40% groom. The layout also look too plain and need some background if possible. This is jus my opinion and no offence here. :bsmilie:
ok, really back to the drawing board.jOhO said:i suppose it's fair that you are new and would like to accept comments on how to improve. but i feel that (anyone) posting up before having gone thru a "self-examination" is just waiting to be spoon-fed.
if you feel that u have done ur best and put it you best effort and have gone thru the first layer of "QC" which is by your own standard, then yes, by all means, post it up and get pointers.
sorree to sound harsh, but such work (both the images and presentation), backup photographer or not, is quite er... damn i'm trying to be tactful here... ahahah... the word is "undesirable". this is my opinion entirely, others or yourself might beg to differ.
true, we all have to start somewhere, but we all should also be our own harshest critic.