[IamRyan] : Bedok Jetty


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Hello shot this while cycling yesterday.
Clouds were very dramatic and i was lucky because it has been raining non stop ever since god knows when.



Shot with Kit Lens and CPL.
I think Composition should be ok. Just want to find out about the mood, what you guys feel about and if there is any area i can improve in for this picture.
 

Mar 24, 2008
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Very dramatic. :thumbsup:

It would have been even better if you can angle it in such a way that the jetty looks more symmetrical.
 

jtsky

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#3
It gives me a feeling of 'unreachable'.
 

HTCahHTC

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INDEPENDENCE DAY! can try to clone away the lamp posts?
 

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How was it in colour?
Maybe I'm just a colour person la...
 

Renesix

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The sky.... looks a bit artificial, unless u doing purposely
 

night86mare

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prefer a 16: 9 crop here - since the top part of the sky is not that essential in the picture.

note the horizon tilt and the converging verticals. these are little things that can be corrected easily to make your picture better. :)
 

iNotion

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it looks like a bridge linking to a faraway unknown.
i agree with night86mare. If you can crop it to 16:9, the output will be better.
 

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