I love you...

[ray_stinger]

I really do...

 

[zoossh]

gd idea.

but is the pen/pencil red or black?

 

[Stoned]

I feel it might be stronger with more DOF, esp on the words.

 

[roti_prata]

I feel it might be stronger with more DOF, esp on the words.

hmm i agree. notice the I and R(foreveR), they seem out of focus. maybe u can move the pen further away so tt the words can be clear while the pen is still kept blur

 

[ray_stinger]

Thx for the feedbacks..actually the slight oof for the words is a delibrate attempt. Because I wanna create a slightly dreamy mood.

 

[DT_]

put the red maker pen there instead...

 

[+evenstar]

maybe with a signature of some sort too?

 

[zoossh]

Thx for the feedbacks..actually the slight oof for the words is a delibrate attempt. Because I wanna create a slightly dreamy mood.

i also thought that that slight oof is acceptable (sharp isn't wrong too) as long as it is not too oof.