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zoossh

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gd idea.

but is the pen/pencil red or black? :D
 

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Stoned said:
I feel it might be stronger with more DOF, esp on the words.
hmm i agree. notice the I and R(foreveR), they seem out of focus. maybe u can move the pen further away so tt the words can be clear while the pen is still kept blur
 

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put the red maker pen there instead...
 

zoossh

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ray_stinger said:
Thx for the feedbacks..actually the slight oof for the words is a delibrate attempt. Because I wanna create a slightly dreamy mood. :)
i also thought that that slight oof is acceptable (sharp isn't wrong too) as long as it is not too oof.
 

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