I am still waiting.. for my sweet old revenge


Dec 26, 2008
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1. in what area is critique to be sought?
Colour, tone, composition

2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
Well, my intention was to give a "reminiscence" feel. kinda like what title denotes.

3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
The picture was taken in the late morning, along a corridor of an old house

4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture
As i am really bad with colors, i hope that you guys will be able to give me some advice as to whether the right colors were choosen for the intended feeling i was planning to portray :)
 

cabbySHE

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Dec 5, 2008
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The colour, tone and mood are alright and suitable for this scene.

As the window pane, thick walls with ledges, metal casement windows, those olden light switches, those concrete vents and those double swing doors all indicate they belongs to the era of 50s ~ 60s. However, that chair was a much later product, I would have much prefers if it is an old timber chair with rattan lacing in the center will fit in better, or those old kopi-tiam type of teak wooden chair is even better.

Does not relates anything to revenge.
 

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