How u all think about this pic which i took..

[Sunny815]

any comment ???

 

[Rashkae]

No impact, kinda boring, don't know what it's supposed to portray, no subject.

 

[Sunny815]

this 1 leh ???

 

[Duinchlfc]

what were you intending to potray or show by taking that picture? Is there a story behind it?

 

[m3lv1nh0]

Play with curves to add more punch to it.

 

[Sunny815]

hmm.. no story leh.. jus see and shoot nia.. haiZz.. can iask.. wat u all normally look out for when u all shooting huh ???

 

[Zeddy]

There is no subject in the first picture. The colour is also quite dull.

The second picture is better but looks a bit underexposed.

 

[Rashkae]

hmm.. no story leh.. jus see and shoot nia.. haiZz.. can iask.. wat u all normally look out for when u all shooting huh ???

Try to tell a story.

Also, please remember that this is the Newbies corner... If you're looking for C&C, there's the galleries section.

 

[navlem]

If you don't mind, I did some touchup to give it some effect to your first pic..

 

[luntut]

If you don't mind, I did some touchup to give it some effect to your first pic..

this looks sooo much better.

to TS:

dun be disheartened. go out shoot more. dun expect good results first time round. i used to trash entire day's of walkabout in the past cos they were either crap or crap, or no impact at all.

just remember. every picture tells a story. do you have a story to tell?

and dun be too scared to use technology. sometimes you NEED to PP your photos to bring out that impact, or the point that you wanna bring out across.

 

[Sunny815]

tks all.. i won be dishearted.. i think i got alot to catch.. i will jus keep shooting.. i'm weak in pp.. do u guys think i shld take up courses on basic photography and photoshops???

If you don't mind, I did some touchup to give it some effect to your first pic..

Tks!!! really looks much much better.. wat kind of pp u done ???

 

[yehosaphat]

There is a critique corner for this

 

[estel]

second shot is decent. you could improve it with some levels adjustment.

keep shooting and you'll improve a lot.

 

[ortega]

do not use this section as a gallery

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