too shallow DOF - would prefer to plain background. seems like you shot this on a table with a wall further behind. Try somewhere near a window where there's natural light, then convert to B&W, add some grain...effect maybe better IMHO
right mouse-click your photo in the clubsnap gallery page, select "properties", copy the address(URL) of your photo, (which ends in .jpg), insert the image in your post in the clubsnap forum by selecting the "insert image" icon and pasting the address in the text box that appears in the pop-up window.