hooked on cigarette


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ovc17m

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Kindly give your constructive C&Cs on this photo, especially the composition and framing.

Thanks, still learning... :sweat:

 

bahibo

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for framing, i think let the line lower a bit,give more space above , ur pic dont seem to have any focus point , u want to focus on the white thing or the line ? Colour also a bit dull.
 

grimicer

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the title is great, when i clicked, i thought i was going to see a photo with a youth smoking but this concept is good.

good eye, but photo seems soft.
 

ovc17m

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Hi all, thanks for viewing & your comments.

Sorry for the softness, I guess it's due to my poor shooting technique & lousy PS. The actual photo seems a bit sharper. Think my PS makes it worse. :embrass:

I'm using AF18-200mm F/3.5-6.3 lens btw.

Just like what my friend says, idea is nothing without execution. :bsmilie:
 

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for framing, i think let the line lower a bit,give more space above , ur pic dont seem to have any focus point , u want to focus on the white thing or the line ? Colour also a bit dull.
for framing, i think should b remained at this height.
as the white cigarette butt n the brown dried leave form a subtle visual balance.
if the wire was lower, then the leave will b cutoff.
juz a thought tho... :)
 

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Hi all, thanks for viewing & your comments.

Sorry for the softness, I guess it's due to my poor shooting technique & lousy PS. The actual photo seems a bit sharper. Think my PS makes it worse. :embrass:

I'm using AF18-200mm F/3.5-6.3 lens btw.

Just like what my friend says, idea is nothing without execution. :bsmilie:
I think you can still use the unsharp mask on PS amount 100%, radius 0.4
 

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