help me improve k? first shots on clubsnap


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Klose

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Are you a scout? Nice bridge you have there ;)

The first 2 shots are somewhat cluttered? Very hard to figure out what the subject is. The last one seems pretty alright.
 

joe

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Hi there,
the first two pictures,I don't understand what are you taking? :think:
 

pikapi

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yeah... had my campfire last sat. are u one too? im from catholic high. you?
 

Klose

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pikapi said:
yeah... had my campfire last sat. are u one too? im from catholic high. you?
former scout/venture. GES Dragon ;)
 

pikapi

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ahh icic. same here. finished rovering already
 

jonlou

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4th pic would look absolutely brilliant if the shot was taken abit lower... covering the entire top structure filled with the sky in between.... nonetheless, nice attempts play with the DOF in the first 2 pictures....

is that u in the last picture? :cool:
 

Dogfish

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The first two pics you're concentrating on e knots right?? If so, the colours from the background are pretty distracting. Esp. the blue nylon on the second pic. Maybe B&W would have been better
 

RGB

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i think some croping will help what equipment are u using ?
 

Goldenstars08

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I like the 1/4 building and 3/4 sky photo.
Shot more...learn more...:flame:
Ha...ha..ha... :bsmilie:
 

pikapi

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hey im using a Canon A95. how about u??
 

yanyewkay

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looks like NCC(AIR) cadets to me..

Sorry only the 4th shot works for me. The rest don't tell any story. Maybe you can add a caption to tell a story. #1 and #2 are basically almost the same shot. Just choose one to display will do. #5 good try, but what is he looking at? No attention drawn to any object. If there's a campfire below and he is gazing at it then it'll draw some nice subject attention.
 

aspire

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hey, i am a A95 user too. good cam to start off with newbies. i like the 3rd shot with the sticks and sky best.
 

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cat high cf issit??
last sat haha..
seems like i got a fellow scout here..

Pegasus from Southern Cross Scout Group

cheers...
 

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