foxtwo said:
I think I've said or insinuated the 2nd line once or twice before. It's harsh but not mean.
The little mental photography checklist has to take 2nd place, understanding why the photographer attempted the picture is more important. And I write the same way, I find it really hard & long-winded to try seeing a casual snapshot as a normal picture and comment on it as such. It's obvious I'm not perfect. I prefer to jolt the photographer into learning to junk snapshots in search of something better. It's sharp and direct. Many have written before that we don't have to time to write long critiques that examine each aspect of the image. Frankly, trying to comment on a casual snapshot is the hardest C&C, because anything and everything could be changed/improved. If you & we clearly knew what you wanted to say (with the picture), then everything will be so much simpler.
But it's good that you've made clear what you've found acceptable and unacceptable ahead of peoples' C&C.
Don't get me wrong... I am not offended by your comments at all. I fully understand that taking a good picture takes planning. Rarely do we take good pictures on the 1st take. When I post pictures up here, usually I plan to retake them, but I want to find out how I can plan better.
I went out on Mon late afternoon for a walk because I needed some fresh air after sleeping the whole day no thanks to the flu. My intention was to take a row of colourful shophouses down the street (which I did). However, on my way there, I spotted this 'window' through the leaves and trees... through which the HDB flats appear. The lighting was somewhat harsh and contrasty, so I needed to isolate the area. So I zoomed in to the max (at 85mm), and framed the flats like that.
Another place to shoot old HDB is around Kallang river. I will check that out too.
I take in all your points, and I will attempt a reshoot... probably in the morning, and hopefully with more action in the sky (which is beyond my control). With more action in the sky, I will probably lose the trees, which draw attention to the leaves in the corner as pointed out by Ortega.
On the title... the word Heartland does not bear the same meaning to me. I don't live in the Heartland... and I have never lived in the Heartlands. It's a place far far away from me... quite another world.
My other shots that day were a little better... though the lighting was still too harsh. I shall play with it a little with Photoshop. Failing which, I should try again another day, when the sun has set a bit more... Want to see those? But I will be flouting the 1 pic a week rule.